The table wobbled yet again, his hand shot out to support it. But her laughter and squeals of delight distracted him as she shimmied to the beats of Shakira’s latest hit – Tyra looked like a rock star. He whistled his approval and she bent down to give him a kiss.
Whoosh!! Suddenly she was on his head and he was slipping onto the floor. He tried to hold on but they slid onto the carpet. Tangled but unhurt her giggles were infectious as they both sat up laughing. Rita walked in smiling and set the table right again.
Through the month of April, I am writing along with 2009 participants for the A to Z Challenge. My theme for the Alphabet Challenge is FEELINGS and FICTION. The happy, sad, funny, silly, envious, over the top and totally low down account of feelings in 100 words of fiction.
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Short & cute 🙂 looking forward to reading more
I could never understand flash fictions but you have generated an interest in me regarding this. Looking forward to read every piece by you:)
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Thank you Rubina, I like flash. There is less pressure on me 😀
A great start to the challenge! Sorry I couldn’t catch up with your posts yesterday *hides face*
I hope you had a great first day 🙂
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Thank you Mithila, I did, it was cool!
Nice energy , this one has! Lovely start Inderpreet! Have fun with the challenge!
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Thank you so much! Gypsy Momma! 🙂
Wonderful feeling you get after reading your post .
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Thank you so much!! 🙂 Sweety
Feelings and fiction- awesome combination. Great way to start the challenge with an awesome story. Happy writing.
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Thank you so much! Sulekha.
Short, crisp & lovely ! Hope to read more from you. All the best !
My entry for A to Z Challenge 2016: Letter A for Anchor
http://nav-justanyrandomtopic.blogspot.in/2016/04/atoz-challenge-2016-letter-for-anchor.html
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Thank you so much Nilima
A beautiful story depicting a powerful imagery about love and art. What a flying start!!
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Thank you so much! Vishal
………….and I could picture the whole scene in front of my eyes.
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Thank you so much! Kalpana
And you captured a moment in just few words 🙂
well written!
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Thank you so much! Simran
I could hear the laughter, felt the giggles. Great writing. @donnanotdiva
Lifepainlaughter.com
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂 Donna
Lovely moments of delight!
Nibha @ Expressions
Arriving Late
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Thank you so much! Nibha.
Great start, very fun light hearted story.
@magickislife from
My Creatively Random Life
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Thank you so much! Melissa
I love your story already.
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Thank you so much! Belly
beautiful moments !! I assume the one who walked in is the mother 🙂
Visiting from A to Z Challenge
Pam’s Unconventional Alliance Team
A Whimsical Medley
Twinkle Eyed Traveller
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Thank you so much!
Wonderful! Looking forward to more in the coming days!
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Thank you so much! Ruchi.
Very Nice Post…
Welcome in the letter “A”… thank you!
Jeremy [Retro]
AtoZ Challenge Co-Host [2016]
Stop over and find a free “SIX STRINGS: BLOGGING AtoZ CHALLENGE” Here: http://www.jmhdigital.com/
HOLLYWOOD NUTS!
You know you want to know if me or Hollywood… is Nuts?
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Thank you so much! Jeremy
Sweet and short. Totally loved it.
Good luck for the month!
Seena from
Thinking Aloud
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Thank you so much! Seena. You too!
Light and entertaining performance by Tyra 🙂 Look forward to reading more
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Thank you so much! I liked Tyra too! 😀 Dahila
Beautiful Start. Loved the energy in this one. 🙂
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Thank you so much! Sheethal! 😀
Cute story. Moments like these are precious in life.
– Chicky @ http://www.mysteriouskaddu.com
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Yes, I agree. Thank you Chicky
Perfectly fits the theme of Amused. You can feel the happiness in that moment 🙂
Looking forward to the rest of the alphabets
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Thank you!Roshan. 😀
I love your writing voice in this piece.
Your phrase: “shimmied to the beats…” is such a visual delight!
See you around on the A to Z circuit!
Have fun!
Writer In Transit
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Thank you! Michelle. I loved that part too! 😀
Such carefree fun and laughter can bring so much cheer and sunshine around us!
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Thanks a ton, Shilpa. I agree. Laughter indeed! 😀
Very interesting.See you around this April 🙂
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Thanks a ton! See you around!
love your article 🙂
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Thanks a ton Varsha 🙂
My, my, how creative is that!! that was one light and fun read!
Shubhangi @ The Little Princess
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😀 Thank you so much,Little princess. Glad you like it.
Waah! That’s what you call a brilliant start. I could picture the entire scenario so perfectly. Loved it! 🙂
Visit to read Army Wife Tales at Tale of Two Tomatoes
Also drop in to check 26 Chicken Recipes at Something’s Cooking
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😀 Thank you so much, Shalzzz. So kind of you. Glad you like it.
Lovely start to the series Indy! Light and fun! Cheers 🙂
@KalaRavi16 from
Relax-N-Rave
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Thank you so much, Kala! 😀
Table dancing can be dangerous! 🙂
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😀 It can be fun too!! 😉 Thank you so much, Debbie
Great start inderpreet! I smile to myself and felt good reading this.
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Thank you so much, Me. 🙂
This story leaves me feeling happy. Great start to the challenge. Looking forward to more.
Mary
Twitter: @KnottyMarie
Literary Gold
Jingle Jangle Jungle
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Thank you so much, Mary.:D
Love the light and upbeat writing you have done here. 🙂 It brighten up my day, the giggles and the moves. <3
@rosemawrites from
A Reading Writer
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Thank you so much, Rose. Glad you liked it. 🙂
I really do! <3
Aren’t these moments a delight to experience 🙂
Love,
Geets
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Yes, they are Geets! 🙂
A very good start to the Challenge. You are good at flash fiction.
A – The Art Attack
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Thank you so much! InGeniousty. 😀
Like this piece. I’m not to much into flash fiction usually, so the #AtoZChallenge is a wonderful way of finding it, as many people are writing fiction.
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I agree, I enjoy the fiction best during A to Z. Thank you so much! Astrid.
A beautiful, exciting start to the A to Z challenge.
Loved the energy in this story 🙂
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Thank you so much! My era. 😀