#Promise #BarAThon Challenge @blogarhythm1


#Promise #BarAThon Challenge @blogarhythm1

Promise - holding hands

We held hands as we spoke, as our eyes devoured each other.

We made a promise to be together, forever as our breaths mingled as one.

To see each other through, to be there together as our rhythm united.

Life is so temperamental as it strives to challenge our promises.

Each new day, each hour gone by takes us to a place where our resolve is tested and our promises tried.

I held on and you held on as life went on, near and far – apart yet never separate.

Finding us adrift, falling apart as life tests us, time and again.

A promise is a promise, that’s what we say as we find common ground.

To stick to us, to find our together again.

That is what we will do, what we do, what we shall do.

A promise is but just a promise till we do what we must do.


This post is for the Day 7 of the Bar-A-Thon Challenge

The prompt for today is “Promise” (to yourself/someone else).

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  • Sulekha
    Posted at 08:55h, 08 August Reply

    Beautiful promise. Staying together and being there for each other through things and thin is proof of true love.

  • Sunila Vig
    Posted at 10:36h, 08 August Reply

    Beautifully written Indi 🙂 You have worded it well and made it cryptic in the end which is delightful.

  • Cafenined Words
    Posted at 11:00h, 08 August Reply

    A promise is a promise…till we do what we must do

  • vishalbheeroo
    Posted at 12:55h, 08 August Reply

    Promises are meant to be kept and you’ve expressed what lies inside my heart, Inderpreet:)

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