Surprise #atozchallenge

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Through the month of April I am writing along with 1900 participants for the A to Z Challenge. My theme for the Alphabet Challenge is FEELINGS and FICTION. The happy, sad, funny, silly, envious, over the top and totally low down account of feelings in 100 words of fiction.

Blade Knife Razor Sharp

Monty was sure that as the evening progressed it would bear fruit.

He had checked Macy’s schedule, her routine, even snooped into her appointment diary and followed her home a few times.

He knew he had plenty of time to welcome her so Monty was relaxed as he laid out the various surgical instruments, neatly lined up on a tray, shining and sparkling.

He would ensure that she agreed to all that he asked for today, unlike the office.

He turned at the noise of the key turning; it was early for her he thought as the SWAT surrounded him.

 

Here are the feelings I explored!

Amused

Brave

Contempt

Depressed

Elated

Frustrated

Guilty

Hostile

Intrigued

Jealous

Kindness 

Love 

Melancholy 

Neutral

Offended

Passionate 

Queasy

Repugnant

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Comments

  1. Stepheny Forgue Houghtlin

    Blog hopping from North Carolina during the #Challenge. I started WAY down the participant list figuring they wouldn’t get as much traffic. I am just finding your blog. As a writer, I am happy to find your theme to learn from. Thank you. I have been writing about hotels and inns, come and have TEA on the letter T day if you have time or interest.

  2. CM

    Hey! Nice little mystery you have there .. 100 word format kept the tale nice and tight .
    I used to admire fiction writers and that’s why took up fiction as a theme .. Can’t tell you how much my admiration has multiplied ! Hopping across to your other stories now 🙂

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